1 week Animation In-Class Critique – Advanced Animation

 

The feedback I received was that the animals in the crane machine could benefit from being more detailed and different from each other and less uniform. The animals also don’t go to the same border of the screen as where the claw comes in. The yellow animal in front needs to be moved so that it’s in front of the crane, and perhaps some of the other animals as well. It was pointed out that the sides of the claws connect in a non-uniform way. It was suggested to either make them more uniform, or to exaggerate the non-uniformness of it in order to show how broken the crane is. The motion of the crane exiting was too uniform in comparison to the motion of the crane coming into the frame.

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